15:37:09 <m-relay> <v​ostoemisio:matrix.org> Hey guys, 
15:37:11 <m-relay> <v​ostoemisio:matrix.org> First script draft for Introductory video refresh below. I think it's short enough to just post it straight here in the chat, let us know what you think:
15:37:13 <m-relay> <v​ostoemisio:matrix.org> Financial privacy is important for everyone. However, in today's growing digital world, companies, governments, and individuals can have their data compromised. Monero is a decentralized solution to this – it is digital cash that focuses on keeping financial transactions secure and untraceable. It is easy to use because its privacy features are built into the protocol. These spe<clipped message>
15:37:15 <m-relay> <v​ostoemisio:matrix.org> cial cryptographic techniques are used to hide details, like how much Monero is being sent and who is involved in the transaction. Monero automatically protects your privacy – but, if someone wants to share their information, they have the choice to do so. Privacy can help individuals avoid price discrimination or government overreach, and businesses can enjoy a peace of mind kn<clipped message>
15:37:17 <m-relay> <v​ostoemisio:matrix.org> owing that their operations remain confidential. Additionally, Monero’s mining algorithm, which creates 0.6 XMR every two minutes, lets anyone with a regular computer participate, and the innovative scaling design keeps transaction fees low and stable. Monero is open source, with a thriving community of passionate developers and dedicated freedom advocates. Take back control of <clipped message>
15:37:19 <m-relay> <v​ostoemisio:matrix.org> your finances and start using Monero today.
18:54:29 <geonic> for comparison, here is the current script:
18:54:33 <geonic> To most people, financial privacy is very important.
18:54:33 <geonic> But banks, big corporations, and even governments are having their records compromised.
18:54:33 <geonic> The undeniable conclusion is that there is no safe place to conduct transactions.
18:54:33 <geonic> Well, there wasn’t one. Meet Monero. Monero is a secure, private, untraceable currency.
18:54:33 <geonic> WIth Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds.
18:54:33 <geonic> Monero is private. This means businesses can keep their suppliers in secret. As well as citizens escape government repressions and nosy neighbors or crooks.
18:54:33 <geonic> Monero can also be selectively transparent and you can choose who you want to see the transactions.
18:54:34 <geonic> Monero is dynamically scaleable, which makes it very different from a bitcoin. Also, the block reward will never drop below 0.3 XMR and the nominal inflation will stay at 0.3 XMR per minute.
18:54:34 <geonic> Monero is decentralized. It has an active development community of over 30 contributors.
18:54:35 <geonic> Take back control of your finances and start using Monero today.
19:05:19 <geonic> I think the current script does a better job of both a) presenting the problem and b) pitching the solution (Monero). If anything, I'd put even more emphasis on the surveillance we're exposed to on a daily basis (credit card companies tracking purchases, social credit scores, etc) without sounding paranoid. Maybe even mention how most
19:05:19 <geonic> cryptocurrencies offer less privacy than a traditional bank account.
19:06:05 <geonic> The disappearance of cash and CBDCs could also be mentioned
19:12:24 <m-relay> <v​ostoemisio:matrix.org> I like the current script too and would be happy to adjust the factuals in it and move on, up to the community
20:06:10 <geonic> I took a stab at it: https://pastebin.com/0tdY7aVc
20:09:07 <geonic> which means that it can grow => allowing it to grow
20:10:38 <geonic> This means people can => This means people and companies can